Tomzillas Revenge

        Written by: TomZilla

Scene one: Flashback.

Narator: Long ago, In the South Pole, A Tomsaurus was traped in a ice cavern for millions of years. But the dangers humans bring to Earth awoken the 10,000 year old Tomsaurus and transformed him, In to a bigger, more powerful, smarter Tomsaurus, Thus TomZilla was born.

                          Scene Two: Tokyo.

Chilly Raptor: Oh come on where can a ugly boy get food in this place…..       

Kutie Pie: Oh shut up CR we all know your not aloud in Japan after what happened last time…. So what are you doing here?!

Chilly Raptor: Yes…. Im in a disguise…….. *pulls out Fredy Couger disguise*

*Starlit runs onto the screen*

Starlit: Hey guys! Did you hear?! They found some weird bones in ice at the South Pole!

Kutie Pie: What?

*Chilly Raptor puts on Fredy Couger disgiuse as Cop walks by*

Chilly Raptor: Um…. Hi? This is Fredy Couger…..

*Starlit and Kutie Pie laugh at CR*

Starlit: Why do you follow us CR? Its freaky……

Kutie Pie: Yeah, You need to get a life…

*Chilly Raptor ignores them and watches TV*

Chilly Raptor: Hey look! Their having a documentry about those bones!

Tv Reporter: And these…. Mysterious bones have been took in to investagate, and have found out their millions of years old! This is weird their here because 2 years ago we bombed the South Pole.

Kutie Pie: Wow, I wound what happened to the other bones, like the head, and body…..

*Josh Opens door*

Josh: Sorry I was late! I just heard the Tv Report and hurried over here as fast as I could!

Josh: Chilly Raptor? WTF are you doing here?

Chilly Raptor: SHHHHHH! All you know is Im Fredy Couger…….

Starlit: Ok….. Other than That, I heard that a small island was attacked by some monster…..!

*Starlit changes TV channel*

TV Reporter: And as we head to the Weather, The small islands off Japan were resently attack by a “Monster” as they say….

StarLit: See? They said the radioactive rays they found in the islands were found in car sized footprints! And its skin and blood is almost like the skin and blood of a Tomsaurus!

*Chilly Raptor puts on Fredy Couger disguise*

Cop: Hello How is your day? (In Japanese)

Chilly Raptor: Hi I am Fredy Couger….. I guess……

*suddenly they all hear footsteps*

Kutie Pie: WHAT WAS THAT!?

StarLit: Who knows? It could be that monster I was talking about….!

Cop: Be still I’ll take care of this!

                                                       Scene Three: Outside at night

Cop: Hmm….. Hey…. Is that a explosion?!

Kutie Pie: Looks like…… I giant… DINOSAUR?!?!….

StarLit: Woah, I didn’t really want the monster to come to Tokyo now…!

Chilly Raptor: I always wanted to kiss a giant dinaosaur….

*monster comes closer*

Cop: Woah….. RUN!

*Cop tells them to follow him to a Science Fair*

                                     Scene Four: Science Fair.

Super Nerd: Uhh… Like….. I tested some dinosaur samples they found on those islands.. And uh…. *uses inhailer* found out this is no ordinary “Monster/dinosaur” thing, but it closely resembles a Tomsaurus so therefore Im naming it TomZilla.

StarLit: Um…. Yeah….. Thats nice….. I guess……

Chilly Raptor: But what esle was in the DNA?

Super Nerd: Well, it turns out, this monster was awoken by atomic bombs and radioactive structure.

Kutie Pie: But what does that have to do with anything?

Super Nerd: Lotsa things……

*ground starts shaking*

*Cop looks out side*

Cop: Um… Guys… “TomZilla” is coming!

Chilly Raptor: RUN! MY FREDY COUGER DISGUISE IS MELTING!

Kutie Pie: Thats good Chilly, Now I don’t have to kill you, The disguise is doing it for me….

Starlit: Um.. Guys no time for chit chat, TomZillas looking at us!

*Super Nerds look up*

Super Nerds: HALLELUJAH!

*As Kutie Pie, Star, Chilly Raptor, and the cop run, TomZilla eats the Super Nerds*

                                                       Scene Five: Top Of A High Sky Scraper at night.

Chilly Raptor: AHHH! TOMZILLAS STILL COMING!

Starlit: Hmm… It seems He likes to travel South…… Hes going back to the South Pole!

*As TomZilla walks ever closer, Chilly Raptor walks to the front of the edge of the bulding*

*TomZilla stops at the front of the building and looks at Chilly Raptor*

TomZilla: RRRRRAAAAAAWWWWWRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!

*As TomZilla Roars, Kutie Pie comes up to Chilly Raptor and pushes him in TomZillas mouth*

Kutie Pie: THATS WHAT YOU GET STALKER!

                                      Scene Six: In TomZillas Troat

Chilly Raptor: AAAHHHHHH!!!!! IM FALLING! Hey! Theres free Chorros here! AHHHHHH!

                            *Scene changes back to Top Of a High Sky Scraper at night*

Starlit: I guess we better run….

*Everyone runs but the cop*

Cop: Umm… WOAH!.. Nice Dino…. Nice… Dino…..

             * TomZillas back spines glow bright green*

Cop: What does that mean? Is this like that “Gojira” movie I watched last night?

 *TomZilla blasts a green radioactive heat beam*

Cop: AAAAHHHHHHH *Beam hits him*

                                   Scene Seven: On the ground again

Kutie Pie: Wheres the cop?!

Starlit: I DON’T KNOW! JUST KEEP ON RUNNING!

TomZilla (In background): RRRRRAAAWWWWWWRRRRR!!!!

*TomZilla blasts beam at Sky Scraper*

*Suddenly Kutie Pie and Starlit hear a explosion*

Starlit: WHAT WAS THAT!?

Kutie Pie: I think that was the sky scraper we were just on!

Starlit: At least we aren’t on it anymore!

*Starlit and Kutie Pie run into a building*

                                                           Scene Eight: Mysterious Building

Starlit: Hello anyone in here?!

Dr.  PumpkinPie: Hello, What do you want?

Kutie Pie: Anything that will kill the monster!

Dr PumpkinPie: What monster?

Starlit: Look outside!

*Dr. looks out side at the firey scene*

Dr. PumpkinPie: Hmmm…… Yes Ihave the perfect thing for that….

Kutie Pie: Hey weres Josh?

*Josh runs in the door*

Josh: OMG! DID YOU SEE THE MONS’TER!?

Kutie Pie: Oh yes, we did…

Dr. PumpkinPie: Hmm… Follow me…..

*Dr. PumpkinPie takes them into the lab*

Dr. PumpkinPie: Say hello to the Structure destroyer! It will kill anything thats in water…..

Starlit: We need to get TomZilla in water then!

Josh: TomZilla?

Starlit: Long story…..

Kutie Pie: But Star, how are we gonna get TomZilla into water? For all we know he could hate water…..

Starlit: Well….. Hes been frozen in ice for millions of years, you think he hates water?!

Josh: Stars got a point…..

Dr. PumpkinPie: Well… I did manage to get a sample of “TomZillas” DNA… It turns out he eats fish… Lots of it…. Even whales…. Maybe even people….

Starlit: Hmm…… Were gonna need alot of fish…..

Kutie Pie: But….. How are we gonna get alot of fish…

Josh: I KNOW! At Chilly Raptors house….. It always smells “Fishy” there…

                     Scene Nine: Chilly Raptors House

Kutie Pie: There in the frige!

Starlit: Wow…. Thats alot of fish….

Josh: Were gonna need a bigger bag…. Than this Wal-Mart bag……

Starlit: Hey! Look!….. Theres a sign that says “Fish Bag”…. And A button under it!

*Star presses button*

House Computer: Please leave now, Fish Bag has been activated, This house will self destruct in 10, 9, 8,…..

*Star, Josh, and Kutie Pie run out of house”

House Computer: 5….. 4….. 3….. 2… 1…….

*BBBBOOOOOMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!*

*A giant bag filled with fish pops out of house*

Josh: Wow…….

*Somehow they carrie the bag to Dr. PumpkinPies lab*

Dr. PumpkinPie: Hmmm….. That might work…. Now we need to put these dead fish in Tokyo bay…..

                                                   Scene  Ten: Tokyo Bay

TomZilla (In background): RRRRRRAAAAAAWWWWWRRRRRR!!!!!!!

*As TomZilla ever walks closer Kutie Pie, Josh, And Starlit fill the bay with fish*

TomZilla (Walking) *Stomp* *Stomp*

Kutie Pie: HEY! I hear him coming!

Starlit: Me to!

Josh: We better hurry…..

*Dr. PumpkinPie brings Structure Destroyer*

Dr. PumpkinPie: Hurry Into this boat!

*Everyone gets into boat*

*Dr. PumpkinPie puts on divers suit*

Dr. PumpkinPie: Ok… Now we wait for TomZilla…….

*TomZilla jumps into Tokyo Bay swimming, and searching for fish*

Dr. PumpkinPie: Im going in…..

*Dr. PumpkinPie jumps into water*

*Dr. presses random buttons on the Structure Destroyer*

*Meanwhile, Above on the boat*

Starlit: I hope hes ok…

*Water fizzes*

TomZilla: RRRRRAAAAAAWWWRrrrrrrrrr….rr…r………..

*TomZilla turns to bones and falls to the sea floor*

Josh: YES WE DID IT!

Star: TomZillas destroyed!

Kutie Pie: But wheres Dr. PumpkinPie?!

*Sad music plays*

                                Scene Eleven: Back inside

Tv Reporter: Yes It turns out TomZilla is dead, Along with the person who killed it, Dr. PumpkinPie………….

*Screen turns black*

                                                      THE END

Actors: TomZilla (In “TomZilla” monster costume)

Josh as Josh

Chilly Raptor as Chilly Raptor

Sir PumpkinHead as Dr. PumpkinPie

Actresses:

Starlit as Starlit

Kutie Pie as Kutie Pie

Special thanks to Actors and Actresses for letting me put you in the story………

 

12 Responses to “TomZillas Revenge!”

  1. Tomzilla Says:

    Thanks if you read this story, I made it my self! 😀

    1. anahappysword Says:

      Great story,but hoe did they get into C.R.’s house?Did they have a key or something?

      1. Tomzilla Says:

        Actuly xD…. “TomZilla” smashed through his house xDDDD

  2. blue dragon Says:

    xD

  3. starlit15 Says:

    OMG! Its SO funny what you make us do and say XD its sad that Dr. pumkine pie and you die in the end 😥

    1. Tomzilla Says:

      Star, Thats not me xD Its a giant dinosaur of some type xD

  4. lol Says:

    Lol, nice!

    _mamaluigi, i use blogger, so i don’t have an account here, DO NOT JUDGE ME.

  5. Tomzilla Says:

    My fav part is when CR gets eaten xDD

    1. Tomzilla Says:

      Also, so far this is the most comments my blogs had in one day xD

  6. Noisy Fish Says:

    Cool Story TomZilla!

    You should do another one with me in it 😀

  7. lolkutiepie Says:

    I should have kicked him then push him down a hole then kill him 😀

  8. KraziGirl Says:

    awesome stroy bro espiciallu like when CR dies aka gets ear=ten :D:D:D:D

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